WG10 four week review N317

[Chris Vaughan]

Dear David Price

WG10 four week review N317

Please find attached my issue file for the above ballot 


Regards
Chris Vaughan
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***Title
WG10 four week review N317
***Owner
David Price
***EMail
dmprice at us.ibm.com
***Version
Version 1.3.14
***Documents
Guidelines for the content of application modules Revision 0.7
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***Categories
Editorial
Minor Technical
Major Technical
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***Clauses
1 Scope
2 Normative references
3 Terms, definitions and abbreviations
4 Application module content overview
5 Specification of application module content
Annex A Conformance testing concepts for application modules
Annex B Examples
***Issues
,1,Chris Vaughan,chris_vaughan at bigfoot.com,Guidelines for the content of application modules Revision 0.7,5 Specification of application module content,Editorial,5.2.1 Information requirements documentation ;;1. units of functionality ;;duplicate word (which) in text:-;;the name of the AM in which which the UoF ,,,,CEV,9 Nov 2000,
,2,Chris Vaughan,chris_vaughan at bigfoot.com,Guidelines for the content of application modules Revision 0.7,4 Application module content overview,Editorial,Section 5 has the statement;;This subclause provides a complete list of the UoFs defined in the AM and defined in any other AM used directly or indirectly by the AM. ;;This is an important statement and should be included in the overview section 4;;I don't think the indirect AMs should be listed - See next issue ,,,,CEV,9 Nov 2000,
,3,Chris Vaughan,chris_vaughan at bigfoot.com,Guidelines for the content of application modules Revision 0.7,5 Specification of application module content,Major Technical,"Secetion 5.2.1 Information requirements documentation  states;;This subclause provides a complete list of the UoFs defined in the AM and defined in any other AM used directly or indirectly by the AM.;;I firmly believe that an AM should only reference the UoFs that it addresses directly.;;1. the higher level the module the longer this list of indirect AMs/UoFs  will get.;;2. the indirect list can be generated automatically from the USE FROM statements;;3. the HTML modules repository does this already;;4. this is another list that needs to be checked and is only informative as the USE FROM statements are the definitive information;;5. Module developers have not consistently followed this rule, some modules have the full list and some don't;;",Remove the requirement for the indirect AMs/UoFs,,,CEV,9 Nov 2000,
,4,Chris Vaughan,chris_vaughan at bigfoot.com,Guidelines for the content of application modules Revision 0.7,5 Specification of application module content,Editorial,"Last line of section ""5.3.4.1 Global rules as supertype constraints and using subtype constraints"" - ""the that purpose"" should be ""that purpose"";;In the cases where any constraint may be written using an EXPRESS subtype constraint instead of a global rule, a subtype constraint may be specified for the that purpose. ",,,,CEV,9 Nov 2000,
,5,Chris Vaughan,chris_vaughan at bigfoot.com,Guidelines for the content of application modules Revision 0.7,5 Specification of application module content,Editorial,5.3 The module interpreted model - repeated word (the);;The MIM documents the interpretation of the the information requirements into the common resources,,,,CEV,9 Nov 2000,
,6,Chris Vaughan,chris_vaughan at bigfoot.com,Guidelines for the content of application modules Revision 0.7,5 Specification of application module content,Editorial,5.3.3 Concept completion and assignment ;;What does the word ;;prepended ;;mean. Not in my dictionary,,,,CEV,9 Nov 2000,
***DateStamp
 9 Nov 2000 12:1:15
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