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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Jochen , Phil,</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Thanks for the draft of Exp2 that helps a
lot.</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Some minor issues:</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>- Clause 7.6 (language version identification)
should be removed or amended on the basis of Stockholm
decision</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>- grammar rules in clause 9.2 are not consistent
with grammar rule in clause 9.2.3 (and it would be better to have only once
these rules rather than than having them 3 or 4 times in 9.2.x )</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>- clause 9.7 should be located much closer to
clause 9.2.3</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>One major one (I do not know whether it has already
been discussed):</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>- in clause 9.2.3.4, I am quite surprised to read
that in a subtype an attribute of type Generic_entity can be redeclared in a
Generic_entity select. This is inconsistent with the 1st rule in that clause
that states that an attribute may be redeclared in a specialization of the
original entity data type. </FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>regards,</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Pascal Huau<BR>Association GOSET<BR>107,111 avenue
Clemenceau<BR>92000 Nanterre<BR>France</FONT></DIV></BODY></HTML>