[wg11] Latest draft of Part 21 Edition 3 ready for quality checks

[Thomas Thurman]

Hi Martin.
We are getting there.
Apologies for not bringing up the 'articles' thingy earlier.
Tom

1-(This one from ISO editor:)
remove articles "a"/"the" from the start of definitions

2-The new definition for 'reference' introduces undefined terms: 
external exchange structure,
resource.

3-In definition for resource, remove 'on demand'. It adds nothing and introduces confusion.

4-clause 6.5
replace 
The following additional encodings are used in the anchor and reference sections.
with
The following encodings are used in the anchor and reference sections. 

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>On Jun 28, 2013, at 2:54 PM6/28/13, Martin Hardwick wrote:

> 
> Hi Tom,
> 
> Thanks very much for this list of issues.
> 
> I believe they have all been addressed in the new version that has been posted to the web site.
> 
> http://www.steptools.com/library/standard/p21e3_dis_paris.html
> 
> Martin
> 
> On 6/24/2013 5:11 PM, Thomas Thurman wrote:
>> Martin,
>> Comments below.
>> Tom
>> 
>> 1-Line 130 should be clause 3.5.
>> 2-"Anchor and reference section encodings" (current 6.6) should precede "anchor section encoding" (current 6.5).
>> 3-line 661 'term' should be 'terms'.
>> 4-line 699 'terms' should be 'term'.
>> 5-line 743 definition appears to be obsolete as anchor covers more than entity instances?
>> 6-line 774 definition also appears to need updating.
>> 7-line 1581: "..The integer spaces for the two types of names cannot overlap" would be clearer as "The integer spaces for the two types of names are not permitted to overlap"
>> 8 clause 6.4.4.2 Value names: I could find no examples in annex K. Be more specific as to the location of the example.
>> 
>> 9-6.5.2 EXPRESS constant. An example showing the use of the object identifier to represent schema version would be useful to include here. (see also 9.2.7)
>> 
>> line 2282: the following is ambiguous:
>> If a time stamp is included and its value describes a date and time after the date and time in the file_name of the header of the referenced exchange structure, then the referenced exchange structure has not been changed since this time stamp was created.
>> replace with
>> If a time stamp is included and its value describes a date and time after the date and time in the file_name of the header of the referenced exchange structure, then the referenced exchange structure has not been changed since this exchange structure was created.
>> 
>> line 2313: "data and time" should be "date and time"
>> 
>> line 2317: The clause "validity of the time_stamp_text in the referenced file" is undefined.
>> 
>>  clause 9.2.4: change the note into an example. There are no guarantees that a future version of the exchange structure will have the missing data.
>> 
>> clause 10.1: It appears that a value_instance can be declared only in a reference section. It would be best to make that explicit, if true.
>> 
>> clause H.4 The note should explain why the exchange structure is conformant to conformance option {4,1}.
>> 
>> =======end comments========
>>> On Jun 21, 2013, at 4:16 PM6/21/13, Martin Hardwick wrote:
>>> All,
>>> 
>>> A new draft of Part 21 Edition 3 has been posted to the web site: http://www.steptools.com/library/standard/p21e3_dis_paris.html
>>> 
>>> This draft is believed to be complete and will be submitted to ISO as soon as the necessary quality checks have been completed.
>>> 
>>> Therefore, if you find any errors it is because they were missed, not because we have not yet gotten to them, so please let us know.
>>> 
>>> Martin Hardwick
>>> Editor Part 21 Edition 3
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